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| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseVery Coldplay-esque! Nice! |
| from beneath the bell jar 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abusewow...the bridge was kickass! Loved the chorus too, but the bridge was awesome. Very well-written. I would kill the hear this as a song. As I read it I sort of heard it sung to a John Mayer song (stop this train). I usually pick a fav line, but really the entirety of the chorus and bridge were my favs. Amazing. |
| xo Secrets 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. That Is Sincerely Beautiful. All The Emotion Captured Is Steadily Convyed &... Just Wow. I Love The Lines "but just remember we can share/the constellations in the stars" It's So Sweet & Innocent. I Would Absolutely Love To Hear This Performed! The Lyrics Are So Inidividual & Pleasant... I Love It! Lots Of Love & Best Wishes ~ xo Secrets |
| ode to a firefly 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, pretty! =) Do you have a tune yet? ♥Christine |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was incredibly beautiful. It was innocent and pure and it reminded me so much of being a child and having friendships like that. The bridge was my favorite part, especially when you finally incorporated the title into the song. So gorgeous. Wonderful job. Keep writing! :) |
| boys kiss girls 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis made me want to cry. I think it's one of the most beautiful songs I've ever read the lyrics to. I really, really, really want to hear you sing it. We could record it and send it in to Mae and see if they'd take the demo. It seems like a Mae song... Who's moving away? I bet it's Monica, isn't it? Unless it's one of Maddy's friends because it kinda seems like Claire wouldn't dedicate... anything... |
| Osunale 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely: sad, lonesome, and reminescent, yet made of sweet-filled cherishment. It's a wonderfully flowing song, and pleasant to read aloud. I can imagine that it must be beautiful actually sung. Good work. |