cars zipping by like flies around a corpse (nice comparaison)

Oh I also like the idea of naming the title. Sounds like the song How to Save a Life. Smile.

Cute ending.

aww poor boy

glad he has a friend tho

Brava... That's rather deep. I like how the emotion was built up as I read further and further down the page, but then all emotion seemed to disappear right when the story ended. It was very in synch with the story and it gave an answer that is meaningful and useful.

Oh! Very nice! I like this story! I like it! Um...if you don't mind me asking, would you like to see my stories? They're called The Catalyst's Rebellion (TCR) and Stargazer. Wanna see/review them? Sorry to ask. Keep up the good work! I'd read your other story, but I don't have time right now.

Hi its me from the manga club, I came to read one of your manga stories but this caught my eye first.

Its really well writen, even if it is short.

I like how you didn't describe too much in this one, leaving it open ended made it much more accessible. I might be mistaken, but I think you might be able to get away with a T rating, that might expand your audience just a bit, some people tend to shy away from M stories, but this is entirely your decision.