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Ivory Taint 2007-03-04 . chapter 1
I liked it but I think you could have elaborated a bit more.
Shades Of A Tulip 2007-02-14 . chapter 1
The water's not dry because the water cycle says so!

Kidding.

Cute skit.

Read and review for me, too!

-Tears
Steamy Dumpling 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Haha, that was quite amusing, almost as amusing as to how to handle a brat. :D

The only things I would watch out for is grammar and spellings. Grammar applies to you when it comes to capitalization. Other than that, please keep on writing more!
Hunter Victoria 2007-02-11 . chapter 1
Cute idea.
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