Forgot To Say- in the name of the Review MArathon!

I like your repetition. It really made the poem that much more emotional.

I don't think I like the thesaurus vibe i was getting at the last few lines. Too many synonyms for the same concept. You should have ended it earlier.

-Stardust, review marathon.

Reminds me of a friend I have.

Keep writing,

Alan.