This was a very interesting piece to read. The part that really stood out to me was, "They want to “cure” us. Cure us of what? This glorifying knowledge? This safe state of mind? They just want us to forget, they want to take down the safety of what we know as right." I really like this. Great work, keep writing, and thanks for the review.

wow. very deep. i like the metaphors here. it's just, so, wow. meaningful. nice, very nice fict. i love this. and the knowledge thing is also beautiful. also the way you wrote how they're in control &etcetc, it's just so good.
great work. keep writing.

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.

impressive.
this is cool. seriously.
the sanest of all, huh?
i love this.