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" She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained." She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained by your obligations and his insecurities. If it's meant to be, you'll find each other one day and you'll be ready for the relationship." Adi kissed his cheek. "Now go. It'll only get harder the longer you wait."

Aww cute... I LIKED ANDY! Anyway, awesome story. I liked them only becomming serious later on - so much more realistic (relationship wise). My fav characters were definatley Adi, Regina, Andy and Armaan - too cool! :D

i read this today, good story. I like what you do to Gabe and Robbie, that they come back together later. They are more mature now. I want Ady to be my big sister too...can I??

You have some edit to do however.

chapter 5 : the live journal entry start at the date Friday, September 15, 2005
chapter 7 : Sunday, September 17, 2006
chapter 8 : Saturday, October 7, 2007
chapter 9 : Thursday, October 19, 2007 (logic with ch.8)

chapter 2 : you write this about the cell : The slim black phone vibrated in his hand, singing the Barbie Girl song annoying
chapter 4 : you write : A pink Razr?" Henri asked, raising an eyebrow.

Chapter 3 : "I'm glad you pay such close attention to what I say," Adi said sarcastically, unlocking the door. "Why do you need the computer?". "I have a livejournal," Gabe muttered.
Chapter 5 : "You use livejournal?" Adi asked in surprise, leaning against the door to her room, watching as Gabe exited from the site. "That's why you wanted to use my computer?"

Chapter 12 : in the middle, you repeat a sentence twice : "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment." "What do you mean?" "I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained." She rubbed his back comfortingly, eyes kind. "I think you have to let this one go, Gabe. Neither of you is ready for such a commitment." "What do you mean?" "I mean that you're young. Besides, if you got in a relationship, it would be strained…….

Gwen

awesome story! i couldn't stop reading it!

Wow - the p0rn in this was FANTASTIC! Some of the best I've read in a while. Plus, the story was awesome; I couldn't go to bed until I finished reading it. It was far too addicting. The fact that you had a span of a few years before all the woes could be rectified made it even better. Well done, well done indeed. :)

Thanks for a good read!

Hm.. rather unrealistic portrayal of street life. Mostly because of your character Adi, as she's being incredibly generous and trusting to a random stranger picked off the street =/

... Shakespear in Love isn't THAT bad... okay maybe it is...

This story is hot and sweet.
Your writing is very entertaining. It just makes me want to read more.

I cannot help but notice you haven't updated in a while. Not feeling like it? No inspiration? Too bad, because your stories are really good!!

Interesting. I like the idea of Gabe giving the entire school a shock by being a drag queen! HA!!
I gtg now, but I'll probably finish the story tomorrow. . .
L e e

Aw, poor widdle Gabe's a teensy bit obsessed. xD

Loved this story. Which was why I reviewed every (or almost every, because I think I skipped one accidentally) single delicious chapter.
Your smut scenes definitely got better over time, my friend! I applaud you.
Great job, keep it up. (:
-Choice.

I loved it. A happily ever after has come! :D
...Is there a Craig in this story, because if there was, I don't remember him.

I guess the pairing of Robbie and Gabe has grown on me, because now I want the two of them to just shag already. xD
Your friend wrote a mpreg story with Pete Wentz in it? Can you send me the link please? :P

Wow. Life really sucks big-time for Gabe. I feel bad for the poor dude. :(

Ooh, finally, some lezbo-ness is dragged into the picture! (: