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| Catseye*Rose 2008-03-10 ch 16,  | abuseThat was a lot of fun!! Cute and romantic, with the perfect amount of drama. Loved it. I liked all the characters (even Andy). I'm glad it was a happy ending! (It tied everything up well.) Can't wait for the sequel! |
| bugger off 2008-01-05 ch 9, | abusecute. :) i like. |
| CrayonMentality 2007-12-15 ch 7, | abuseThis is interesting...:) |
| sunflowersing 2007-11-29 ch 16, | abuseThank you for writing this wonderful story! :-D sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2007-11-28 ch 8, | abuseThis is such a cool story! :-D sunflowersing |
| souzen 2007-11-22 ch 4, | abuselove your story! |
| Gravilove19 2007-09-29 ch 16, | abuseI really enjoyed reading your story it was so sweet. I read your other story the interview as well and I loved it to. S great job. |
| vampyricangel 2007-09-29 ch 16, | abuseI just finished reading your story. I must say that it was very well written. I know that the story was about Gabe and Robbie, but a part of me wanted to know about Henri and Andy. I guess I wished them happiness too because they most certainly were a pair of messed up characters. And rightly so. Also, I wonder how Amy's life is going to end and Ira. The epilogue also left me wondering about the finer details of Robbie and Gage's relationship. I mean, I can see that they're happy, but at the same time, I want to know about how their relationship lasts through the years. They just got together after all that hard work and it's over. I suppose I want to know if they do stand the test of their love through time. Perhaps I merely ranting. I loved the story though! ::The Vampyric Angel:: |
| RezBratOnna 2007-09-17 ch 16, | abuseThis was a good story-everything was detailed and nice, giving me a glimpse at what was in store for Gabe and the characters around him. Though Amy was a little annoying-she was just-there. She was Robbie's sister and that was it, and whenever her parts came in, I just sorta skimmed over it. Then the story began to break up-as if there was no interest in continuing it or giving it some sort of life. Suddenly everyone was just a name and not a character, and while I did feel bad for both Robbie and Gabe, I couldn't put any effort into it because they were just so cardboard. But toward the end, it started to pick up. Then ended. argh. Though it all left an impression, because I was still thinking of it, like, hours later. I'm going to check out your other stories; while this story didn't exactly leave me giddy, it has interested me in seeing what other works you've got. |
| Kane-sama 2007-08-25 ch 16, | abuse*claps* Thank you so much for this story, the last chapter made me `aww` which isn't often xD |
| Casey.Duh 2007-08-23 ch 16, | abuseI want to make love to this story and have little one-shots with it. Weird but it's true. Anyhow! I loved it. |
| Lerene 2007-08-23 ch 16, | abuseThat was great. real good story. Can't wait for the sequel. |
| Anniedoc 2007-08-21 ch 16, | abuseThis story was so good. Annie |
| sweets555 2007-08-20 ch 16, | abusecute!! i like it, very well written! |
| Liviania 2007-08-18 ch 16, | abuseSo, we don't get to know what the surprise is? How evil. It's nice to know that they're happily ever after. Livi |