Woah! This is a great story! So much emotion, so much happiness! They sound like the perfect couple! It needs a beginning that's more developed, though. I hope you keep on going with their story, if that's what you have planned. Anyways, I love the story and I hope to see more!

AW that was so cutee. AW I can't get over it that was so sweet.

AWW THATS SO ADORABLE! wow
i think ive heard a story sorta like this but when i started to read it like it didnt even click until i got to the end. hahaa. i like the writing style and stuff. the sentences seem a bit shortish like stoppy or something, like you could fuse a couple of them together. but otherwise really good, keep writing!
~Noelle

aww thats cute

Aw cute