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Nemonus
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuselol, I like your warning: it's like "please don't feed the poems". I've got a whole mess of poems not quite worth reading either, but I like reviews for them anyway.

This one is inconsistent with regards to form (and that's how it goes with emotion-poems), but it's got this memorable phrase "lose the blush". It's not all that angsty either, or not cloyingly so.
PocoSnow15
2007-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm the shyest person you could imagine (well, not that bad), and yes, angst is THE BEST! I always forget the promises to myself too, so don't worry about it. I loved it! Great job!
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