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| Nemonus 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuselol, I like your warning: it's like "please don't feed the poems". I've got a whole mess of poems not quite worth reading either, but I like reviews for them anyway. This one is inconsistent with regards to form (and that's how it goes with emotion-poems), but it's got this memorable phrase "lose the blush". It's not all that angsty either, or not cloyingly so. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm the shyest person you could imagine (well, not that bad), and yes, angst is THE BEST! I always forget the promises to myself too, so don't worry about it. I loved it! Great job! |