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| vampireprincess1606 2008-08-17 ch 51,  | abuseNO! IT CANT BE OVER! *SOB* i love this story! plz plz plz continue it!! |
| AMM3485 2008-08-14 ch 51, | abuseThis is a really great story! I loved every word of it. Awesome job! |
| Xxmoon-nightxX 2008-08-13 ch 51, | abuseoh, that it is good! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-08-10 ch 50, | abuseok so is that the end offically? I liked it! |
| Felinity 2008-08-09 ch 50, | abusewow such a good story. completely worthy of a good book i could curl up in front of the fire and read for days lol ever new chapter had something new and kept my attention right till the end, very well done and a great ending :) |
| lily1250 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abusewow, i have read a lot of stories in fictionpress, but none has gotten me so intrigued as to actually review it. Absolutely love the characters and the interaction, and love the ending. it was simply unpredictable. once i start reading a story i always know how the ending is going to be. but this one was awesome. I thought that Cassie eventually will fall for Alexander ( in a weird twisted way). And also how Alexander eventually found someone to love. Cant wait for more... |
| Waltz-of-the-Dead 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good beginning, very interesting and detailed. The characters are well written, strong, and very personable. This is a strong foundation for a wonderful story that I cant wait to read more of, every word had me grasping for more. I look forward to reading the rest of your marvelous story. P.S. Sorry for the long delay in reviewing your story I have been every busy as of late. |
| MamiPapi 2008-07-06 ch 50, | abuseNice story I really enjoyed reading this though it was long. Will be continuing to read your other stories as well. Alexander is such an **... although he is lonely and had a horrid childhood I still hate him for doing those things. Aramis is also an **, but less so... hehe I guess I'm never satisfied eh? |
| Syzygetic 2008-07-02 ch 49, | abuseI just remembered something I wanted to tell you, and I was reminded of it as I read the review that remarked that the werewolf side was lacking. I felt a little something missing there, too, but maybe it was due to the fact that Alexander had so much time for his character development and Aramis was introduced later in the story, so he had less time to really develop his character, you know? From his side, I see a sort of gentle and loving feeling, but I felt like we really didn't get to know him that much before he started professing his feelings to Cassie. I felt like I was a bit of an outsider to his half of the story, whereas in Alexander's side, I felt as if I was a part of the action. I'm not quite sure what I'm getting at. If you make a sequel, I would suggest a little more character development for him, maybe we could see more things from his POV... Anywho, like I said before, the story reads quite well and you should be really proud of it :) |
| Syzygetic 2008-07-02 ch 50, | abuseAww, I'm so happy that they both found love in the end. Too many stories you see like this have really unsatisfying endings, you know? You managed to pull it off in a way that was romantic but not at all corny. Props to you! The story reads quite well, I'm sure you're proud of it, and you should be :) |
| ObSeSsEd With ROXAS 2008-07-02 ch 50, | abusegoddamn. all sorts of awesome ** is a happenin' update soon :) |
| Monelisa 2008-07-01 ch 50, | abuseO I just finished and I so cannot wait for the sequel ... i am such a huge fan of vampires and werewolves ((Twilight by stephenie meyer)) but I love your story and the decisions the characters made ... i on the other hand do not think the story between aramis and cassie is boring it is fantasy ... romantic fantasy and i love every part of this story ... you hear so many different versions between the stereotypes/characteristics of vampires and werewolves and i honestly have to say this is the best portrayed of them especially werewolves when you tend to think of them as monsters more so than vampires but aramis is just a doll! when asked which one you would be ... after reading this ... it just becomes so difficult who to like more! =] thank u so much and bless you and all your talent! |
| Rio's Desire 2008-07-01 ch 50, | abuseE!I just can't wait until your next book! The part with Alexander was great, but the part about Cassie and Aramis was a little boring, their side of the story needs something. Werewolves are awesome, not boring. Anyways Update SOON! |
| orangesharpie18 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseHey girl. Loved the whole story, as usual. I'm about to read the sequel and I'm super excited. :) |
| Carmel March 2008-06-21 ch 50, | abuseAbsolutely great ending to the story. I just want to say...thanks so much for writing this, and I hope to see more from you soon :) ~Carm~ |