Good job on this. Keep it up.

Hi. ^^ Thanks for the review on Divinity Syndrome. Much appreciated!

Is the first person perspective here from a reflection of the woman? If it is, that's really interesting. If it isn't, it's even more interesting because I have no other idea what it could be. ^_^''

I love the way you've worded this. The most striking sentences are the shorter, simpler ones, such as the last line 'Then she closed her eyes and I disappeared forever.' It gives a lot of impact. It's a very melancholy piece of writing, which is great considering that it's so short. Most short pieces I've read don't give out much emotion, but this is packed with it. ^^

good...