Oh my god I ADORED this story!! Loved the pairings and the plot. You definitely made Glenn very hateable- God I hate homophobes. Anyway- can't wait to read more of your writing!

okie, I'll add you when I'm next on there. I'm invitationtosin.

lol DAMNIT now i have to remember my livejournal account? lol i'll check if i have one already and if i don't i'll get one. I'll look forward to reading more of Gavin and Jayden's story. Thank you, tho, for the fantastic story that you've provided so far.

thats unfair cos i dont want to have to sign up to another site just to read your stories that you could just put up here.

and its a good story too

No!
Aiden and Alex are the best! They're the heart of this story!
BTW If I want any news I have to add you at LJ to my friends?
OMG I don't even know if my LJ is still alive!

Are you still going to post the rest of SS on FP or not? No offence but livejournal really annoys me (I like yours but that's only because of a certain guy on the mood pics *drool*). I don't mean to be annoying but please anwer the question.

OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME! I LOVED THE CAPTURE ME GENTLY STORY! I LOVED JAYDEN AND GAVIN THE MOST! I LOVED ALL OF THEM! BUT HOW BOUT CHRIS AND JO?!?! PLEASE UPDATE THIS SEQUEL I WANNA SEE WHAT'S HAPPENED! PLEASE! I LOVE THIS THANK YOU SO MUCH!

YOU'RE AWESOME AND WONDERFUL!

luv&hugs,
H-BGP

Hey!
I read your story and just wanted to tell you that I liked it very much. To tell the truth I loved it. And I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Ok I love your stories and I've read all of them... ok MOST of them and I KNOW that I've read this story! The sequal I mean. Why isnt it posted? What happened?!!? PLEASE will you e-mail me and tell me and then tell me when you post it (again) PLEASE!! I really liked it and I want to know what happnes!

~shadow

dude, I am TOTALLY excited about the sequel! whoo!

'“Can I come in?” Alex asked with a small, nervous smile.'

It's supposed to be "MAY I come in?"

Everything is so godly written so for, but it seems that the 'conflicts' of feelings on both parties seemed to be so easy and somewhat rushed.

OMG *SQUEALS EXTREMELY LOUDLY* you finished it! I can't wait for the sequel. And ben and riley's story. and jayden's. well done for getting to 33 chapters. And can I ask you something? How do you make your chapters long? Because I always write a lot on A4 paper and it comes out as about 3 pages on WORD.

Aw, it's over! I agree with Love Eternally, all good things end today.. I just finished Harry Potter, too *cries*
But anywa, gosh, Gavin is so cute, trying to seduce Jayden at every chance he gets :) And aw, poor Aiden... Aiden and Alex both have been through so much stuff that it's good they have each other :)
So, um.. Can't wait for the sequel and prequel and everything :) Hope they're up soon. Au revoir!

I still think Kiss Me Properly is a better name than Capture Me Gently, that it fits better.

I love the ending. The cuteness between Jayden and Gavin, and the nice little scene wrapping everything up for Alex and Aiden. It was a very enjoyable story, and thank you very much for writing it.

I'd just like to say, first of all, thank you so much for being an amazing writer. Your description, your plot, your characters make up for every single horrible story I've ever read ten thousand times over. 'Kiss Me Properly' (soon to be 'Capture Me Gently') was one of the most amazing pieces of fiction I've ever read.
I honestly think you could make this into a ficlet kind of thing; maybe it would even sell - I know I would buy it :D

My favourite character would probably have to be Gavin - the way he came into Jayden's life, kind of by accident, perhaps, and totally changed him for the better.
My second favourite character would have to be Ben, just because he's so crazy and wild. I can probably relate to him (well, minus the drugs and alcohol XD), because my friends and I are really perverted n stuff :P

My favourite pairing for 'Kiss Me Properly'... hmm ... probably Jayden/Gavin, because it's a kind of 'forbidden love', in a sense. Gavin is 16, still in high school, in a way he's still a child. Jayden is 22, owns a club, and is a heartless bastard (eek x_x I know he has it in him not to be!) to everyone else. Pair them together ... well, Jayden becomes a completely different person (: And so does Gavin.

10/10, and I can't wait for 'His Love for Him' and the story on Jayden's past.
Once again, thank you so much for being an amazing author. I think I'm in love with your writing :) :P
~DY