|Reviews for Capture Me Gently|
| Shadow1290 7/31/07 . chapter 33
Ok I love your stories and I've read all of them... ok MOST of them and I KNOW that I've read this story! The sequal I mean. Why isnt it posted? What happened? PLEASE will you e-mail me and tell me and then tell me when you post it (again) PLEASE! I really liked it and I want to know what happnes!
| Abstruse Blue 7/27/07 . chapter 33
dude, I am TOTALLY excited about the sequel! whoo!
| adrdem 7/23/07 . chapter 5
'“Can I come in?” Alex asked with a small, nervous smile.'
It's supposed to be "MAY I come in?"
Everything is so godly written so for, but it seems that the 'conflicts' of feelings on both parties seemed to be so easy and somewhat rushed.
| Scribbles Go On Forever 7/22/07 . chapter 33
OMG *SQUEALS EXTREMELY LOUDLY* you finished it! I can't wait for the sequel. And ben and riley's story. and jayden's. well done for getting to 33 chapters. And can I ask you something? How do you make your chapters long? Because I always write a lot on A4 paper and it comes out as about 3 pages on WORD.
| Account no longer used 7/22/07 . chapter 33
Aw, it's over! I agree with Love Eternally, all good things end today.. I just finished Harry Potter, too *cries*
But anywa, gosh, Gavin is so cute, trying to seduce Jayden at every chance he gets :) And aw, poor Aiden... Aiden and Alex both have been through so much stuff that it's good they have each other :)
So, um.. Can't wait for the sequel and prequel and everything :) Hope they're up soon. Au revoir!
| Amindaya 7/22/07 . chapter 33
I still think Kiss Me Properly is a better name than Capture Me Gently, that it fits better.
I love the ending. The cuteness between Jayden and Gavin, and the nice little scene wrapping everything up for Alex and Aiden. It was a very enjoyable story, and thank you very much for writing it.
| Strawbury Duck 7/22/07 . chapter 33
I'd just like to say, first of all, thank you so much for being an amazing writer. Your description, your plot, your characters make up for every single horrible story I've ever read ten thousand times over. 'Kiss Me Properly' (soon to be 'Capture Me Gently') was one of the most amazing pieces of fiction I've ever read.
I honestly think you could make this into a ficlet kind of thing; maybe it would even sell - I know I would buy it :D
My favourite character would probably have to be Gavin - the way he came into Jayden's life, kind of by accident, perhaps, and totally changed him for the better.
My second favourite character would have to be Ben, just because he's so crazy and wild. I can probably relate to him (well, minus the drugs and alcohol XD), because my friends and I are really perverted n stuff :P
My favourite pairing for 'Kiss Me Properly'... hmm ... probably Jayden/Gavin, because it's a kind of 'forbidden love', in a sense. Gavin is 16, still in high school, in a way he's still a child. Jayden is 22, owns a club, and is a heartless bastard (eek x_x I know he has it in him not to be!) to everyone else. Pair them together ... well, Jayden becomes a completely different person (: And so does Gavin.
10/10, and I can't wait for 'His Love for Him' and the story on Jayden's past.
Once again, thank you so much for being an amazing author. I think I'm in love with your writing :) :P
| Love Eternally 7/21/07 . chapter 33
aw! its over! that's it! No! all good things ended today. harry potter ended today too!
| BlueWolfGirl 7/21/07 . chapter 33
A very nice update and ending to the story!
“She’s going to yell at me.”
“She’s going to yell so damn much.”
“And you’re so not helping.”
“I’m not trying to.”
These lines had me laughing so damn much, poor Jo.
Hopes you get the sequal up soon so we can read it and enjoy it some more!
| LilionTheUrbanFairy 7/20/07 . chapter 32
wow! I love jayden a lot and he and gavin are just perfect!
| Scribbles Go On Forever 7/20/07 . chapter 32
o a graveyard...spoky. poor peter. i feel sorry for him. but i hope sarah and marika have a good time together. has marika's ex found out yet? and the boys have a corvette! I love those cars. I walked past a really sexy one today in black with a V8 engine. and glenn is such a dick. he deserves a nasty ending. and I can't wait to hear what happens in the graveyard.
| BlueWolfGirl 7/20/07 . chapter 32
One of your best written chapters, I liked it! I do hope Sarah feels bad about what she did to Peter though.
| Account no longer used 7/20/07 . chapter 32
Hm, I didn't know the story was almost over. You probably mentioned it somewhere, but I forget everything. Anyway, good chapter, and I would say something super-intelligent about it (yeah right) but I really should go and sleep.
| Maris. S 7/20/07 . chapter 32
aww, only one more chapter after this? I kind of don't want it to end *lol* but you've done a spectacular job writing this story and i love every bit of it. That's for sure
I wonder what Jo is going to say to Jayden and what Aiden is going to tell Alex and what in the world happed between him and Glenn. Please update as soon as you get the chance to do so )
| Amindaya 7/20/07 . chapter 32
Well of COURSE I'll review the last two chapters. :D
I love that Aiden is so protective of him.