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| Lemon Sorbet 2007-02-14 ch 1,  | abuseVery dark! It's a really good idea and it works really well. Lucyx |
| Gaki Toki 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseOdd to say the least. I like it. I like it a lot because of many of the reasons an English teacher might like it. I have criticsms but I don't think they're anything that you can really change and still have it sound as...um...poetic. Good job I guess. Gaki |
| polka dots and addictions 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abusethis is a seriously depressing poem. nie idea thoughm & uve worked it well =] x |