 Olivine 2007-02-14 . chapter 1Wow. I'm not sure what to say. That was definitely different. I don't know if this one has any personal connection to you or the people in your life, but I think that including the 'leprosy and your multiple personality disorder' kind of ruined the poem. At least for me. I don't know... I guess your poems are usually a mystery type thing, and seeing the point of the poem out in plain view sort of confused me. Let me go ponder about this...
--Ss.
PS- I did love the fact that the poem was actually a letter. |