Nice. I particularly like the way it ends. Good work :)

*and I totally get what you mean inoyur profile, saying that younger siblings count as pets...hm..."The Care and Feeding of Younger Siblings".*

wow. This is very interesting so far, I hope you'll post more soon. I hope they didn't need anything important, like cute lil' stuffed animals or anything... anyways, cool story, please write more son!

I8SN (aka ur lil sis!)