Is there any way you could somehow show a picture of the "rash"? It sounds pretty freaky/cool. I like the silver-eyed guy; will he be a major character or merely a catalyst for her beginning to find stuff out?

Chocolate Chip, please! ;)

I enjoy the cryptic nature of the story. I can not wait to read more! It is interesting to read.

Well, it's a tad bit cliche, but that's easily forgiven. All you have to do is make it interesting, which has already happened. I can imagine her going to the doctor or something, and then... well, I'm not gonna say it in the review board, but I -think- I know what'll happen next. I -think-.

-SapphireIris

Oh, and sorry I didn't review the last chapter. My author alerts are all funky again.

Duh Duh Duh...The plot thickens. (Sorry, couldn't resist.) I like all of your characters. The itchy spots are an interesting development. (Is she planning on going to the nurse to have them checked out? ) Anyway, can't wait until you update.

I like it very much actually. I'm curious to see where this is going. Who is the boy with silver eyes? What exactly is Ella changing into? And what is up with Marlo and Ella? All these questions that I'm so eager for you to answer! Please update soon, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat.

Ollie May

Well, I can't really leave constructive criticism if there isn't anything to criticise, now can I? Hint hint. Updates equals reviews! I want to find out about this mysterious guy, you know? So update!

-SapphireIris

I hope you continue to write this story; I really want to know what happens! Good job.