Aw... wow im such a sap for happy endings anyway... JBR!

Great story. I love it how you added German culture with the story as it made it even more interesting and sweet. You've portrayed the characters really well, especially Kurt. Good job.

I absolutely love the German text in this :D Haven't spoken it in ages, and this was a good way to refresh it a little bit ^^
Haha, even the cat betrayed Lotte XD she should be very, Very glad she doesn't have an inliving grandma or something, because she'd probably making 'subtle' suggestions about making Kurt her grandchild :P

I'm sorry but I cannot agree with you on the Animal Farm thing. Worst 3 weeks of my life reading that thing. All I could stand was one chapter at a time before i was ready to claw someones eyes out.
I love the story though! Your characters are so cute!

Great Story.

OH! What a sweet story! I loved it!
I've fallen in love with Kurt! He's so sweet!
And actually, I learned some things about history in this story ... LOL
Anyways... it was AWSOME! I loved it! because even though it was the clichéd love-hate relationship, you didn't make it too chliché.
Besides, I loved the fact that it was setted in Europe :)
LOVED THE STORY =)

I absolutely love this story!! You did a fantastic job with the characters and the plot. It was a joy reading this story. Kudos to you!

. What did you like the best about this story? Why? Kurt's multiple personalities. I don't know why, It just amused me.

2. What do you think could use improvement? Uh, nothing.

3. Which characters were your favorite and least favorite? Did you feel that they were developed enough? All of them were awesome :D

4. If I said you had a beautiful body, would you hold it against me?
Why of course not ;D
I Love this Story.

i love the ending.
on the top of the Eiffel tower.
ive always been wishing to go there.

lol.

good job! woodstock1969

OMG.. Why didnt I find this story earlier? TT_TT I'm hooked on the first chapter, honestly I think it really good, just by reading the first chappie. And now I'm tied up with school work that it sucks I can't read the rest until I'm free.. T_T

I think I like Kurt already, he seems so cute and adorable. O.o?

xxPbRxx

have u ever visited the cityes that r n this story or do you just look them up.

“You mean his ding-dong-”
and,
'She started laughing like an idiot, slapping her thigh and going red in the face.' > that was totally me.

ohmygosh! I totally love that bacardi mojito ad! I tried finding the song they used on it but I couldn't, which sucks 'cause it was pretty cool...
good story!
I reviewed CFCT and I see a few similarities (thunderstorms, 'when you get married/remember when you used to hate each other', etc.)
but, again, wonderful job!

aw fluf so cute.

GYAH, THAT WAS ADORABLE!! I loved that story. ^-^ Particularly the Never Have I Ever part, because it reminds me of the same game I play with my friends, 'cept we do it with drinks (water, soda, etc.). Whomever has to pee first loses. ;)

Now, to answer your questions:
1) I liked the descriptions & the traveling, and the fact that you have a pretty awesome sense of grammar and spelling. (Stories that are lacking in those areas tend to dip dramatically in quality.) The plotline is cliche, but your character development is so insanely good, it doesn't even matter. ^-^ I love Lotte's personality throughout the story-- she's just so witty and clever and -real.-

2) Umm, there are a few spelling errors here and there throughout, and they just contrast with your normal writing so much that I think it'd be good for you to look it over again. Beyond that... I think the part where Lotte realizes she loves Kurt seems rather rushed. I feel like that could've been a more gradual build-up, but it's fine nonetheless. :) I also feel like the part with Andreas seemed to be cut short... maybe it's just me? :X

3) I'd have to say my favorite characters were Bryce, Jane and Brigid, in no specific order. Kurt & Lotte would place second. ;) But that's just because I really adore people who are fun and carefree, like Bryce and Jane. Brigid grew on me too. Least favorite? I'd have to go with Will & Co. Pahh-- you need more bad guys. ^^ I think your character development was really good, all in all. There's nothing in particular that has a problem, I think. :)

You're an awesome writer! Hope this helps! ^^
~Hawk.