Continue this story! I want to know who killed Hilary. This is a great story. Please update soon!

Great story. Very descriptive, and nice dialogue. I look forward to reading more soon. ^_^

Hey, just happened to find your story and the summary was far too inviting to miss. I absolutely LOVE this story. It's truly unique (or at least I've never read anything like it) and I really want to see where its going to go. I really would like to meet this mind-reader boy and see what will happen with that. Please, please don't discontinue this story! It is so beautiful and refreshingly original.

I guess it's okay Christa, although I was quite confused at the rape thingy. I really can't produce a review now so...yeah.

~BlackRose-D4

Actually I do have an acount in FictionPress, but i'm too laxy to acknowledge it's presence.

this plot is wonderful. and your writing style is getting better.

wish you the best,
M.A.K.

I'm curious to know who really raped and killed Hilary.

This story looks very interesting. I love the description you made of the characters, including the doll, Elena.

I have to say that it's the dashiest piece of literature I've ever read, and it's only the first chapter! I love it! I love emphasis!