You finally updated! So Adelaide and Zechariah meet. And Adelaide's crushing on Nick... But we all know that she's supposed to end up with Zech! But I wanted to just tell you one thing, it just looks weird when you put explanations in between dialogue; I think it might work better if you explain in a sentence after the spoken part itself, like ("Where's Padre?" Padre was the principal of their Catholic school.") But otherwise, LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

UPDATE SOON!

Interesting premise. She's got three guys who 'want her in a veil' but she hasn't seen ANY of them? She's going to end up with Zach in the very end, right

Srry i hvnt reveiwed in so long, veary long story. lol. your story is great!

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interesting.

you're not going to abandon it, are you?

good beginning.

*smile*

good i want more