You have so many styles of writing! It's amazing that you can write in a memoir style here, but have a different style for Cassidy and Act I. I have a feeling I sound like my english teacher...

Hello again! I'm interested in seeing how this moves along. Sorry I haven't reviewed it earlier, been busy on Gaia.

Anyway, it's nice seeing you write some more ^^

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Oh. Intruiging. I'm actually kind of partial to Yick, strange as that sounds. He seems like a strong man. Very nice start.

On another note, congrats on your nomination for "Best Slash (Complete)" you and Act I definately deserve it. I visited the site a while ago, but apparently you can't vote anymore:(, so I'll just have to give you these twenty hundred votes in spirit.

Looking forward to more of Soler! Ciao!

And he appreiciated that little brunnete the most, right? Heehee. I know why he got the ice bucket in his guy when he looked. I know! bwahahahahhahaa! Go for it you little Soler! WOOT! *does the jiggy dance*

So long to update! I saw the alert and thought "WTF?" but then I noticed teh author and remembered I was reading the story. hahaha. Great job ont his part. I love the description and choice of words. It gets a little confusing, with all the vocab and different planets or areas or towns and villages, but I guess it's not as important and much as the characters.

Woot! You have a distinct tone when writing this story. Great job!

Ohh. This is gonna be fun to read xD I love sci-fi man. I'm so glad you're writing one :D I don't like angst that much but... whatever. Maybe I'll change my mind O:!

Pax.

Ooie, nice cliffhanger. Great second part. It's interesting and grabs teh attention of the reader. Very nicely done. ^_^

Wonderful start, love. =) Haven't read much sci-fi on FictionPress, mostly because most of it never seemed that interesting or just sounded lame and cliche. But since you posted something sci-fi, I just HAD to read. =P Can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.

Ooie! I thought "Yick" as a name was kinda... odd... since I say "Yick" when I think something tastes bad. How do you pronounce Soler? Like... solar? Or Saw-ler or So-lair?

It's a little confusing at firs twith all the terms and such, but I believe playing a bunch of video games and RPG's and such has prepared me to be able to understand this later on. ^_^

I shall prevail!
Good job though. I loved the sci-fi ness of the story and the POV you doned in the beginning. How you get one perspective and don't jump right into the story.

Well I like it so far. I'm curious to know about this Soler and how this story will progress. I like your writing style ^_^.

xx whisper