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| ladyanya 2008-07-20 ch 3,  | abusehey where r u darln? dnt tell me ur thrown this away...please continue... i lovee it...:) pls pls pls pls... |
| ladyanya 2008-02-23 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon! |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseChappies... The work of the devil, no? You're happy-happy and then you realize that there's no more story to read. ((Sigh)). Once again, vivid description and all that stuff that makes people want to read and review. "Add oil." aka update, please? Yeah, that was my slightly deranged twin. But updates would be very very much appreciated. Canada rules. =) -Biohazard |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseNice end there. An elephant. =D. Add oil... -Biohazard |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseHoo ra! Another wonderful fiction from CHIIJOY. Woot! Okay, anyway, no found errors, and yeah... I'm gonna go read some more. -Biohazard |
| ladyanya 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusevery entertaining story, cant wait to know what happens:) please update soon. |
| Jayjack 2008-01-10 ch 3, | abuseupdate when possible. |
| Candyfloss Victim 2007-05-13 ch 2, | abuseviolence is always good when guys start believeing that they can get away with stuff... nice chapter, interesting story! |
| Pyrgus 2007-04-13 ch 2, | abusenice. a ddr game is just what was needed right? ha! So yeah, I've been in JC's place before, multiple times actually, so I feel for her. It is really quite annoying. Muchlove! and please update soon! PYrgus! |
| Point Zero 2007-04-01 ch 2, | abusefifty elleven...that's like 511 right? yeah...I think... ANYWAY! This chaptah was good, except there were lots of gramatical errors like: (quote) He didn’t understand why she wouldn’t let him just apologize to her instead of being stubborn. It wasn’t his fault that he had mistaken her for a girl… well it was in actuality but he was willing to make it right if she’d just let him. (end quote) didn't he mistake her for a boy? Anyways...besides that it was good, there was lots of tension. |
| Baseball2horse 2007-04-01 ch 2, | abuseYea! an update! Everybody feels like crap and everybody hates each other. you like happy storyes don't you. Can't wait for the net chapter. |
| free-to-dream15 2007-03-31 ch 2, | abusesweet chapter but he is being such a jerk!! grr he got what was coming to him though!! update soon! |
| scarlet tear drop 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abuseumm i sent u an e-mail so check |
| free-to-dream15 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuselol please continue this! I love it soo far especialy the end! that had me laughing! lol oh yeah and thanks for the review! |
| Baseball2horse 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it. You should continue this story too. I really want what happens where this "bridge" comes from and how they get under it. |