   Mirabella 2009-11-22 . chapter 1Brilliant!
Loved the flow of this, and the imagery.
Strong ending. :)
Two thumbs up! |
 letyoursoultakeflight 2009-11-21 . chapter 1I am really getting into your poetry (or songs?) at the moment! I love the imagery within them =] |
 Emily Cherie 2008-11-10 . chapter 1Your words are extacy. |
 ruledbythenpen-crimsonrunsthru 2007-03-08 . chapter 1Yet another masterpiece! I have to admit, your pieces get me quite drunk, and massively disoriented with their extreme depth...I feel I should be in a writer's AA focus group or something after reading. |
 xo Secrets 2007-02-13 . chapter 1Wow.
That's All I Really Have To Say... Wow.
I Love The Lines "There's something thin and frail/flowing through the vein./She's pooling into droplets/just atop your vinyl skin." Absolutely Superb Imagery. Your Lyrics Really Are Artistic & Individual; I Really Enjoyed This Piece. ^_^
Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
~ xo Secrets |
 The Silent Wickerman 2007-02-12 . chapter 1great poem. I really liked the second last stanza. |
 fishslappinghighlandflinger 2007-02-12 . chapter 1This is a good song. I love the imagery you created. Keep writing!
~Stan the nerd |
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