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| Bleached Roses 2007-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I've never read a religious haiku that described the epic parts of their faith in such powerful detail. I congratulate you, this is a VERY good piece you've accomplished. ~ Much love, Bleached Roses |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this. I thought you did an excellent job, especially with this being your first haiku, because it certainly doesn't seem like it. You've said everything you need to say in so few words, and it takes a really accomplished poet to do that. Well done! |
| sin olvido 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat haiku! |
| Basara 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseevery religion has their truths that makes it very confusing for the other believers of other ones... nice... |
| Sophia Victoria 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, not bad to make a haiku. Maybe the genre should be poetry/ spiritual since a cross is (in a christian symbological sense) a spiritual sign. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseNice haiku, though i'm not sure what you mean by 'the truth is revealed'. Religion by its very nature relies on faith, not truth, hence the number of different religions available to us on this planet. Keep writing, Alan. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWell said haiku. Excellent. Keep it up. ~Anna~ ^_^ |