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| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2007-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseVery, very nice! I like the overall rhythm and pattern of this, from its beginning to its conclusion. It's also brimming with emotion, another thing I love in poetry. Keep it up. Sakka-Fenikkusu |
| Edgar Wellington 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseYikes! Strong, psychopathic words. I found the following a bit confusing: And like God, I shall sit on my haughty Mountain top, and supervise the destruction I have created. Is this an admission that it was the "I" that created what was destroyed? I don't think so, but it made me pause to think. You definitely have both a lyric and story-telling quality to your poetry. There is an edge you dance on which both repels and attracts me to your words. I have a certain fondness for so-called southern gothic writers, and they do this in a way. They often provide direct and grotesque and dark images which most readers might not want to read about. But their exaggeration brings out certain truthful questions about human existence. Well. I am intrigued enough to continue looking at your words. Thanks for sharing! |