I must say I was surprised when, while searching for my profile, I accidentally came upon a story with my pen name. Still, while your owl's a bit more vengeful than I consider myself, I was quite amused by the portrayal. :D It's not a bad story, actually. You could use some revision toward the end (the transition between her sleeping and being attacked is abrupt to the point of being confusing) but overall, not bad.
-StrixAluco