aw, nice poem. it is true that many ppl try to be 'someone else' instead of their true selves. and man, aint it just annoying? lol, and good ending. xDD;
keep writing.

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Whoops. My previous review (of 'We are All') didn't go so well. I was cleaning my keyboard with the review window open, and don't actually know what was submitted. O_O

In any case, both 'We Are All' and this poem suffer from the same problem: you're telling me what you want to say instead of showing it. Telling is for essays. This is poetry. Show me something true. Bring it to life with imagery.