aw

great story

Erin it's me sarah, and I love your story! it made me smile :) I love cute romances. And I also can hear your voice too, when I read it, which is awesome. It is deffinately original, not like anything I have read before, and I love the names of your characters. I have a question though, in the hospital Alexa said that she still loved Victor. Were they in love before? And the only suggestion that I have would be to expand on Alexa and Victor's relationship. People don't fall in love in a day. So that's all I have to say. Love you dear!

Sarah

This was an excellent story! Do you plan to write a sequeo to it by any chance?

it PAYS to actually read the rest of the story, doesn't it? now i have a much better understanding about...well, why he was crying. because honestly, i thought that was a bit much when he did cry when giving her the present, but now i have a pretty good view of it. it makes sense! off to read the rest.

I really like the story's concept, and the characters are likeable. It is a bit fast paced, but then again it doesn't drag on too much, so I don't really lose interest as I read on. My only critique that I can't help but mention, is probably...I don't really understand the character's thought processes...or why does Victor love Alexa so much, after a simple outing and a few swapping of words. It will probably be revealed/explained in future chapters, so I'll just shut up about it until i finish the entire thing.

Well done for finishing this! Sometimes it is better to leave a piece for a while before commiting to the last bit to clear the head a bit.
Nice twist with Sam, I didn't see that coming. The last sentence was sweet. Glad I was finally able to read how Alexa's adventure turned out.

wonderfully schnazzy!
might I suggest fleshing it out a bit when you have time?
just a thought.
however, I really liked it!
C.

A very good ending to an awesome story

that was a pretty good story, with a wicked sick ending :) !

She should have had Victor bite her; that would have been sexy. (Sorry if that last comment disturbed you)

i loved the line
"I will be with you until the very end, then I will take my own life and we will begin our new life in death."
and
"Yep, we're going to put it to a vote. We are voting on my humanity."

Lycan telepathy? ok then...

aw... :'(

this chapter is so immensely cute! well, at least one part of that. other than that it has good plot development.