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Reviews For: Beautifal Smiles

R. A. Grough
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseAww...I like it :] This was written very well, I must say. And I really like the ending...it wasn't stupid, which it very well could have been. Most of the time good stories end up bad. Writers just don't know how to end them. Fortunately, this was not one of them. Well done :]
Jenna N
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abusethat was awsome! i liked how u used the same 2 paragraphs to start and end the story... it was cool
misery-business22
2007-06-05
ch 1,
abuseloved it!
Dancer for Life
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseI like how it ends just as it starts! Kinda suspenseful... But I started reading this story thinking it was going to be way too long.. a lot of them this length are... They just drag. Then I kept reading and sort of got into it.. Not another dragging story! Good job! But I wonder who she chose.. Because she did say she almost loved John at one point, right? And loved Joe? Was that how it went? Either way...
X.x.XJodzterX.x.X
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abuseAww I luved that! I gotta say dat was the longest one chapter story ever lol. You should do a sequel to this. It could be like about Joe and Drew relationship! x
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