This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!

~Carm~

OMG, she's one of those people that rings you up at ungodly hours of night/morning. This is why I have to trust the people who get my phone number implicitly, lol.
Hilarious chapter, Linkyn needed to get his 'beauty sleep' I was in stitches. Amren just gets better and better.

Wow, she's so funny. I just have to mention one thing though, there have been a few spelling mistakes, left out words etc. I think a common mistake that you make is substituting 'me' for 'my', but hey, it's an easy mistake to make and it doesn't really detract from your story.

I'm still loving this. I only realised how great it was in this chapter that you managed to introduce us to your characters ans give us a strong sense of who they were without revealing their names. Brilliant. By the way, I am in full agreement with Lynkin, Amren is a really unique name. It's cool.

Haha, that was awesome. The guy sounds fun, if a little chauvinistic and this girl is just, hilarious. Love it.

Very very interesting. I don't normally read dialogue based stories, but your's, I must admit, has me hooked.

I love Amren's and Linkyn's personality. So solid.

:D
CkC

Haha

I love your story. It's friggin' sweet so far.
Amren's awesome and guys with piercing are smexii

oh, By the by

i like your writing style hehe

:D

CkC

Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

~Carm~

This story is great, you're doing awesome
Keep it up :)

Awesome!

OH MY GOD!

i'm in love with this story. i stumbled upon it by accident (it's currently one thirty in teh morning...can you say insomnia?) and i'm glad i did.

it will be a new obsession.

i love the charecters...they feel like real people, and the way you write...it's like i forget that i'm reading and just seeing it happen in my head. the mark of a very gifted writer...

kudos to you!

Lovely. I'm in love with this story :)

Hope to read more soon!

~Carm~

I love this story! it's so well written and the charecters are absolutely amazing. i love all of them. i lover you're writing style too. Sarcastic and creatice. i love it! update super soon please! I love Linkyn!

YAY! Smoochies!

That was so original. I've thought about that too... what would happen if we went out THAT late at night?
Well done, I like their personalities too.
Not much to say, just that sometimes it's a bit annoying reading short sentences. Of course, for a short story I suppose it's acceptable...

Maybe?

Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~