Reviews for Broken Promises and Truths Never Told
fhdsuiaknvdas 4/2/12 . chapter 6
Ok, only partially through it and loving it until I read this bit.

Seriously, no teenage boy wouldn't want people to know he's been having sex. It just goes against... nature and society and everything ahah.

Also, Danny is an annoying name.

And so is Kristen.

And Josh, yeah, unrealistic. Just not a good character.

Ahahahah I know it sounds bad but everything else is fantastic, just those things. Which aren't even very important. But I don't know, I thought Josh'd cheat on her or something clichéd like that. Honestly, I think that would be better. Or he should die.
kareena 7/23/09 . chapter 10
So I know you haven't updated in forever but I just wanted you to know that Danny is ZO cute. I stumbled across this story and I think it's awesome. Danny and Kristen are adorable. Please continue with this!
pinkeclipse 7/19/08 . chapter 10
so she is feeling better? is her brother coming back for thanksgiving? how is her grandfather?
belle1220 3/31/08 . chapter 10
I'm absolutely loving this story. It's wonderfully written and I've fallen in love with Danny and Kristen. It has been quite sometime since you've last updated and I hope that you haven't given up on the story.

There are so many loose ends that need to be tied up and I really hope that Kristen isn't pregnant. That would just suck major balls if she was having Josh's kid.

Anyway, I hope you update soon :)
keri 3/7/08 . chapter 7
Hey!

I'm not sure if your still even writing on this thing.. but, i have to tell you - the danny kass story is out of this world.. Ive honestly read it and re-read it liek 4 times. your just so good at making it so believeable.. and i wish you would continue writing it lol - cuz you for sure have a fan in this girl! if you want you can get back to me! but i also loved the shaun white stories too! soo keep up the good work - if your still even writing at all, cuz you have a talent that not many have!

Keri
vballgurl 11/28/07 . chapter 10
o... so i just realized that you haven't updated in almost three months and i really think that his needs to change and you NEED TO UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS IS REALLY GOOD! LIKE NOW! haha! jk... kinda.
vballgurl 11/28/07 . chapter 8
well, that was... explosive. wow.
vballgurl 11/27/07 . chapter 7
o... good chapter! cant wait to keep reading, but my bed is calling. I really love the Kristen/Danny dynamic, but I wish that you'd develop the josh/kristen relationship a little more cause i kinda feel like they're only together for the sex. and she is so pregnant. I'm calling it right now. :)
vballgurl 11/27/07 . chapter 3
haha... love the end of this one!
vballgurl 11/26/07 . chapter 1
just read the first chapter... liked what I read. this ought to be interesting...
keri 11/9/07 . chapter 10
i love this story so much- i hope u keep on writing it, you legit write so beautifully... keep up the good work! :)

keri
Em Wolf 11/7/07 . chapter 10
Dude, i love this story. i especially the characters' characterization and I especially love Danny. Underneath that rough, womanizing exterior is a complete softy and i adore him for it. I would adore you even more if you updated soon ;) Keep up the mag work!
Candyfloss Victim 9/19/07 . chapter 10
i am officially addicted to this story- i havent been on fictionpress for ages so it took me a while to catch up!

but yeah, i really like it. who knew? danny isn't just an insensitive bastard! he sounds pretty decent. i never liked josh anyway, he was a bit creepy about the whole 'i dont want you telling people we're having sex' thing. aren't guys programmed to be proud of their masculinity, or whatever?

anyways, i'll catch ya later
Crimsonlover4 9/14/07 . chapter 10
I LOVE this story.. I couldn't stop reading and I can't wait for the next part :] congrats on starting junior year and stuff.. till laters, and great writing/story :D
Taylor 9/13/07 . chapter 10
Hey! I'm really enjoying this story! It's amazing. I just started it like two days ago and I'm already waiting for this next update. You're doing a great job!
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