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| pinkeclipse 2008-07-19 ch 10,  | abuseso she is feeling better? is her brother coming back for thanksgiving? how is her grandfather? |
| belle1220 2008-03-31 ch 10, | abuseI'm absolutely loving this story. It's wonderfully written and I've fallen in love with Danny and Kristen. It has been quite sometime since you've last updated and I hope that you haven't given up on the story. There are so many loose ends that need to be tied up and I really hope that Kristen isn't pregnant. That would just suck major balls if she was having Josh's kid. Anyway, I hope you update soon :) |
| keri 2008-03-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseHey! I'm not sure if your still even writing on this thing.. but, i have to tell you -- the danny kass story is out of this world.. Ive honestly read it and re-read it liek 4 times. your just so good at making it so believeable.. and i wish you would continue writing it lol -- cuz you for sure have a fan in this girl! if you want you can get back to me! but i also loved the shaun white stories too! soo keep up the good work - if your still even writing at all, cuz you have a talent that not many have! Keri |
| vballgurl 2007-11-28 ch 10, | abuseo... so i just realized that you haven't updated in almost three months and i really think that his needs to change and you NEED TO UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS IS REALLY GOOD! LIKE NOW! haha! jk... kinda. |
| vballgurl 2007-11-28 ch 8, | abusewell, that was... explosive. wow. |
| vballgurl 2007-11-27 ch 7, | abuseo... good chapter! cant wait to keep reading, but my bed is calling. I really love the Kristen/Danny dynamic, but I wish that you'd develop the josh/kristen relationship a little more cause i kinda feel like they're only together for the sex. and she is so pregnant. I'm calling it right now. :) |
| vballgurl 2007-11-27 ch 3, | abusehaha... love the end of this one! |
| vballgurl 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abusejust read the first chapter... liked what I read. this ought to be interesting... |
| keri 2007-11-09 ch 10, anon. | abusei love this story so much- i hope u keep on writing it, you legit write so beautifully... keep up the good work! :) keri |
| Em Wolf 2007-11-07 ch 10, | abuseDude, i love this story. i especially the characters' characterization and I especially love Danny. Underneath that rough, womanizing exterior is a complete softy and i adore him for it. I would adore you even more if you updated soon ;) Keep up the mag work! |
| Candyfloss Victim 2007-09-19 ch 10, | abusei am officially addicted to this story- i havent been on fictionpress for ages so it took me a while to catch up! but yeah, i really like it. who knew? danny isn't just an insensitive bastard! he sounds pretty decent. i never liked josh anyway, he was a bit creepy about the whole 'i dont want you telling people we're having sex' thing. aren't guys programmed to be proud of their masculinity, or whatever? anyways, i'll catch ya later |
| Crimsonlover4 2007-09-14 ch 10, | abuseI LOVE this story.. I couldn't stop reading and I can't wait for the next part :] congrats on starting junior year and stuff.. till laters, and great writing/story :D |
| Taylor 2007-09-13 ch 10, anon. | abuseHey! I'm really enjoying this story! It's amazing. I just started it like two days ago and I'm already waiting for this next update. You're doing a great job! |
| Miss KK 2007-09-05 ch 10, | abuseWell Lisa. I loved that quite a bit. hahah It was long, but I loved it! you're quite amazing. =]] |
| Kimberli Kitten 2007-09-04 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME! Finally all that sctuff happened! Yes! Keep writing! ^^ |