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Anaare
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseWell, is this a poem about (world) war or about Valentine's Day? I'd like to think the latter, because VD has something of a war about it and I think this poem describes this perfectly. Very well worded and written. I commend you! Well done.
wordsworth in a garbage can
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusenice way to ring in valentine's day- with a sort of deafening boom. you're a very gifted writer- if i haven't stressed that enough before in the past.
in theory
2007-05-02
ch 1,
abuseI like words like these; unbound.
this young lady
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseshort & sweet... everything you write just screams "wow" :] hmm methinks you should post again very soon, since this was posted on valentines day which was ages ago! i love the war theme around this anyway. gorgeous
:]
Holly Rose E
2007-04-27
ch 1,
abusehmm. reckless love? reckless lust? spur of the moment? there are a few other connotations you can get from this, and i love them all equally. it doesn't even have to be love/lust. it could just fully mean the kisses meaning bullets, haphazardly shot across the battlefield. or they really were kisses shot beyond the battlefield onto someone else's mouth. yum.

it was beautiful as always. i wish i had the knack to write shorter poems and have them have this much meaning. jealous! andheartssemicolon
dollface and her cancer
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abuse"these kisses were murder". lord, i wish i was writing again.
scuttlebutt
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abusei've seen Band Of Brothers and that's the only reason I know what a crout is. What they called German, correct? anyway I don't know how you can merge war and kisses together and do it well! nice job, I really enjoy your work.
just a ray of sunshine
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. Especially 'these kisses were murder.'

-Sam
dog problems
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abusekickass.
but, unfortunately, it doesn't really seem to be about anything.
(then again, i'd probably have a better feel for this if i knew what crout-scum is.)


colleen
Faithless Juliet
2007-03-17
ch 1,
abuseSmashing, per your usual.

Juliet.
QueenVixta
2007-03-10
ch 1,
abuseHey Noelle,
I haven't been on this site for so long so sorry if I missed any of your posts, I'll try and catch up soon! I've missed reading everyone's work and although I'm not writing anywhere as much as I used to I really want to spend more time on this site once more.
Anyway, moving onto the poem! It was great. Such beauty in so few words which I remember seems to be one of your amazing poetic talents. Hope to read more of your work soon, its as beautiful as even.
Much love, Vixta xx
simpleplan13
2007-03-09
ch 1,
abuseinteresting... especially for valentines day.. lol... short and pwoerful
teh tarik
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseshort sharp bang bang.

i love this.
HauntedMisery
2007-03-01
ch 1,
abusemy god, I wish I could write poetry as beautiful as you.
no.peace.los.angeles
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuse"these kisses were murder" - incredibly sexy. If I knew was "crout-scum" was, I'd probably have a better feel for this poem. It's still great, though. Keep writing! :)
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