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| Anaare 2007-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseWell, is this a poem about (world) war or about Valentine's Day? I'd like to think the latter, because VD has something of a war about it and I think this poem describes this perfectly. Very well worded and written. I commend you! Well done. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusenice way to ring in valentine's day- with a sort of deafening boom. you're a very gifted writer- if i haven't stressed that enough before in the past. |
| in theory 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI like words like these; unbound. |
| this young lady 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseshort & sweet... everything you write just screams "wow" :] hmm methinks you should post again very soon, since this was posted on valentines day which was ages ago! i love the war theme around this anyway. gorgeous :] |
| Holly Rose E 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusehmm. reckless love? reckless lust? spur of the moment? there are a few other connotations you can get from this, and i love them all equally. it doesn't even have to be love/lust. it could just fully mean the kisses meaning bullets, haphazardly shot across the battlefield. or they really were kisses shot beyond the battlefield onto someone else's mouth. yum. it was beautiful as always. i wish i had the knack to write shorter poems and have them have this much meaning. jealous! andheartssemicolon |
| dollface and her cancer 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuse"these kisses were murder". lord, i wish i was writing again. |
| scuttlebutt 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abusei've seen Band Of Brothers and that's the only reason I know what a crout is. What they called German, correct? anyway I don't know how you can merge war and kisses together and do it well! nice job, I really enjoy your work. |
| just a ray of sunshine 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Especially 'these kisses were murder.' -Sam |
| dog problems 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abusekickass. but, unfortunately, it doesn't really seem to be about anything. (then again, i'd probably have a better feel for this if i knew what crout-scum is.) ♥ colleen |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseSmashing, per your usual. Juliet. |
| QueenVixta 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseHey Noelle, I haven't been on this site for so long so sorry if I missed any of your posts, I'll try and catch up soon! I've missed reading everyone's work and although I'm not writing anywhere as much as I used to I really want to spend more time on this site once more. Anyway, moving onto the poem! It was great. Such beauty in so few words which I remember seems to be one of your amazing poetic talents. Hope to read more of your work soon, its as beautiful as even. Much love, Vixta xx |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... especially for valentines day.. lol... short and pwoerful |
| teh tarik 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseshort sharp bang bang. i love this. |
| HauntedMisery 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abusemy god, I wish I could write poetry as beautiful as you. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abuse"these kisses were murder" - incredibly sexy. If I knew was "crout-scum" was, I'd probably have a better feel for this poem. It's still great, though. Keep writing! :) |