| Reviews for Slice of Life |
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Clico78 2/14/07 . chapter 1This isn't too bad, there wasn't much detail but it's alright considering this (seems to be) short and sweet. One error I noticed was "tee shirt" normally people just put T-shirt I've never seen it written as tee, except for people using the slang term 'tees' or whatnot. Anyway nice job. -Asher |