 hirondelle89 2007-02-17 . chapter 1I enjoyed the details that you put in, but I felt like the ending weakened it. I'd rather see your vampire just disappear in the night air than go home to contemplate. He doesn't seem from his actions to consider vampirism much of a curse, either. |
 ElevatorMusic 2007-02-15 . chapter 1Really cool :D |
 garin 2007-02-14 . chapter 1 lovely. vamp stories are always the best. |
 A. Harrison 2007-02-14 . chapter 1I like it but I hate it.
It's too common.
There will always be the story of the vampire. Oh so fun to read about, yet nothing changing.
Don't get me wrong, I am a huge fan of vampire novels, but this one didn't catch my fancy, despite your lovely details. |
 Leinnansidhe 2007-02-14 . chapter 1Yay~! Vampires! I love your description for this, it's all very beautiful and flows wonderfully. Your protagonist seems really, really cool; maybe you could write another one about them? They seem all deadly yet flirty, which is just excellent!
Apparently they actually have a blood bar in the city close by to where I live, crazy eh? People are into some pretty unique things. That's why I love how you made some actual danger in this scenario, and your vampire is very clever to have gone there in the first place. |
|