This was interesting. I'd love to see more of it, that's for sure and you have a MySpace? So do I! If you want to friend my my address is /anbushikamaru (take out the space of course)

This is nice so far. Personally, I liked BSR more than The Drifter but this seems pretty awesome so I'm gonna keep reading. It seems a lot longer than your usual stories are.

I kinda laughed when Krist said in Chapter One that he wanted to be a bassist. I dont think I've ever heard someone say he wants to be a bassist unless his name was Flea. Haha, that was awesome.

By the way, could you give one of my newer stories a read. I have a newer one up call 'I Am The Promise' and I just put up a short one-shot called 'Kiss The Gunner.'

Wow, you're great. Do you know that? You just keep writing and so on. Well I'm not a writer type, but you know what I mean. I hope. I wish you luck on your novel! I've been having this writer's block for far too long. I can't wait to post more stories soon.

"Don't drink and drive, and smoke at the same time." - me ( or maybe someone else who already said this) lol.

Adakuchan

Gruesome stuff. It kinda scared me, seeing all the punk's guts spilling everywhere. Krist had gone from student to killer and that's sweet and all, but you may want to tone down the gore a little. I enjoyed the fight, however.

Great first person.

Nanao

'may the Dark force be with you'

Dude, this is so me. I swear to you every last thing said in those chapters are things I would say and do. I had some problems with a girl just like Krist's prolems so I know what he's feeling.

I get the feeling of a somewhat Manhunt esque gameers circuit going on since Krist did kill three people after all. Two very gruesomely I might add.

Anyway, great chapters man I made myself sit down and read it all the way through. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I corrupt from within,

aka The Madness.

I read chapter two on your Myspace, so I'm caught up (I think).

Really loving this story so far, man. I know it's rare that you write in first person, and this really isn't badly told -- once the prologue got going (Krist got to art class) I was really hooked. It's just the beginning that was hard to follow, when Krist wakes up and starts rambling about really, really random **. It isn't bad rambling -- I could follow the subjects, and most of it was pretty good character development. Just filter out the sentences that don't make sense.

I was really broken-up by what happened between Krist and Aime; you weaved that subplot really well. And now that Krist is with his brother, I can't wait to see what insane stuff happens now.

Keep it up, I'm loving where this is going. I'm sensing a really ** epic plot...

I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

Hey wow, this is really well written (as always) I'm really liking where this is going--all the characters have really defined personalities--I cant wait to read more...i hope theres going to be more :X wonderful! great job my friend.