| Reviews for He's a Beach |
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AllyCred 3/17/07 . chapter 1'The currents are rising, the sky turns to black. The map in my eyes reads "Never look back."' - Favourite part in the whole poem. The rhyming scheme is on point and i love the way it doesn't feel forced. The imagery is very vivid and the choice of words, reads quite eloquently. It's extremely hard getting over people that hurt, i know exactly what that's like. Well done, i love this poem! Lotsa Love AC |
CHIIJOY 2/14/07 . chapter 1"to fill me with thirst that's quenched with the need..." Loved that line. Been there before so it's relate-able and sharp. Good job. :D |