Like the old people song

ahahahhahahahhahahah XD thats soo funny if i sang that to my aunt she would laugh hysterically...ahahah thats so good i really loved it!

~silent

Quite funny, pretty good. As far as songs go, it was very simple. It needs a chorus, and the line about pie doesn't fit. Still, v.v. good, I love the last line!

-Feather

konban wa

This was cute. :D I was actually debating whether or not to sing it to my mom (despite the minor detail of not having a tune). I can picture her reaction: "Wow, that's sweet of you." LoL. Actually, you know what? I think I WILL go sing it to her. In fact, I'll do it right now - before she goes to sleep or I forget. All right, gute nacht, tomodachi. I'm off to sing my mommy dearest a lullaby *wink*

Gute nacht
-Shan-

P.S: Thanks for the laugh. :D

Lol that about describes it huh?

coolness and junk like that. keep writing

LMAO haha. I love it. :D Let's have some pie!

lol, that rocks

rofl, utter crackticious song...My mom would freak out if i sang that but I'm sure I'll sing it in school from boredom...and then get smacked in the head ^_^;

I nearly died of laughter just then. My sister shot me a dark look because I was guffawing so hard. xD.

Nice job. There were one incident were the syllables didn't fit.
"You will get eaten by a bear"..."You'll be eaten by a bear" I think that sounds better, but that's just me.

It would be funnier if you placed the last line in parenthesis, almost like an afterthought.

-Helen

Lmao that was awesome. My dad would laugh =D