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| XsilentXescapeX 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseahahahhahahahhahahah XD thats soo funny if i sang that to my aunt she would laugh hysterically...ahahah thats so good i really loved it! ~silent |
| AluminumMuse 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseQuite funny, pretty good. As far as songs go, it was very simple. It needs a chorus, and the line about pie doesn't fit. Still, v.v. good, I love the last line! -Feather |
| painted.music 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusekonban wa This was cute. :D I was actually debating whether or not to sing it to my mom (despite the minor detail of not having a tune). I can picture her reaction: "Wow, that's sweet of you." LoL. Actually, you know what? I think I WILL go sing it to her. In fact, I'll do it right now - before she goes to sleep or I forget. All right, gute nacht, tomodachi. I'm off to sing my mommy dearest a lullaby *wink* Gute nacht -Shan- P.S: Thanks for the laugh. :D |
| guess who's back babies 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseLol that about describes it huh? |
| JerseySpirit 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abusecoolness and junk like that. keep writing |
| CN5 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseLMAO haha. I love it. :D Let's have some pie! |
| hahahahahahhahahahaha 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuselol, that rocks |
| pixelbee 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuserofl, utter crackticious song...My mom would freak out if i sang that but I'm sure I'll sing it in school from boredom...and then get smacked in the head ^_^; |
| Forever Forbidden 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseI nearly died of laughter just then. My sister shot me a dark look because I was guffawing so hard. xD. Nice job. There were one incident were the syllables didn't fit. "You will get eaten by a bear"..."You'll be eaten by a bear" I think that sounds better, but that's just me. It would be funnier if you placed the last line in parenthesis, almost like an afterthought. -Helen |
| Salt Water Taffy 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseLmao that was awesome. My dad would laugh =D |