|Reviews for Heartstrings|
| deo.volente 9/19/07 . chapter 1
| lovelaced 5/24/07 . chapter 1
That was beautifully written. The imagery was very good too. Great job!
| Hustle Rose 5/5/07 . chapter 1
Amazing, I've honestly never read anything that so well describes being completely in love with someone.
| PM20 3/12/07 . chapter 1
I get this picture of my head of two people intertwined, but with veins and a bloody tissue. I love the last line, like you want to surgically remove this lover from you life.
| Grayhome 3/11/07 . chapter 1
I think the tone's a little dark for the subject. I mean, describing love as a violent act CAN be very effective, but the effectiveness depends on the fact that the emotion does not take a backseat to the violence. Because if the violence is driving the poem, then it seems not about love at all, and the purpose of the poem becomes unclear.
| simpleplan13 3/9/07 . chapter 1
interesting... the begining was so sweet in an odd way, but the part then the tone changed... powerful and beautifully described... awesome metaphor
| a silenced revolution 2/26/07 . chapter 1
Quite well written. The ending was humorous to me. Good work.
| magnusthewolf 2/17/07 . chapter 1
very nicely done. i loved the tone and feel throught this piece. great descriptions and vivid imagery and it kept me interested to continue reading on (which is rare for me) lol ;) great job! magnus
| The Black Rider 2/14/07 . chapter 1
In other words, "Somebody's whipped!"
Just kidding. It's very good, great imagery.