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| The Innocent Demon 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abusehahahaha... this story was so funny! and good.. i loved it! |
| magalina 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuselol That was cute. When is St. Patrick´s day? o.O Keep it up! |
| Amerez 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a fun read! Crazy, but fun. Thanks for posting it. |
| Kailum 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseLOL that is funny ** there. The crazy ** ** made me laugh so hard. "WHAR YA **? WHAR YA'T?" Awesome line Love how they were like. omg since we might not survive, let us tell our deepest darkest secrets. I'd be like, shut your freaking mouth, the crazy psycho's gonna hear us! XP |
| Twinkling Moon 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseCute, I enjoyed reading it. |
| Esquirella 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute, but why does he ask him out right after explaining, "I'm not gay, but ..." |
| Naked Penguin Fetus For Pop... 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL! WHAT THE ** HELL? Oh my God. This was hilarious. Well, I guess Jesus WAS right. Ask and you shall receive. Actually, I don't really remember what I im'd you. And I'm a bit afraid to ask. In any case, this was seckzi. I want more of the crazy guy though. Maybe a background story about his troubled life? He lived on a farm and his Dad died and his Mom married a drunk and then he would like beat her and then she took him and ran and they lived in the hills with the sheep and he morphed into human/sheep and became the Sheep God and then when there was a storm that made him go insane and he was fully human and the sheep disowned him as their God and so he had to go live with the humans and they treated him like ** so he decided to kill/rape some emo highschool boys. Yes. That is what happened. Lmfao. I need sleep. |
| Emma 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have one complaint. I really, really don't like stories that start with sentence upon sentence of pure description. Sure, it's nice to know what a character looks like, but having whole paragraphs that do nothing but describe them is a bit of a turn off. Or was this meant to be the "humour" talking? Oh, so hilarious. *rolls eyes* |
| sam el hamon 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseugh im angry thatu wasted my time withur retardedness! lol jk! luv the storie! write more stuff! |