hey this was pretty good.
i plan on reading more of your work.

Aw. That's really sad and kinda depressing, espeacially for you. Your love poems usually have a kind of hopeful vibe to them. I didn't get that hopefulness AT ALL. But that's what you were aiming for, I'm sure. Really great job on this.

~Black and White Dreams~

Amazing and this poem is off to join my favourites list!

aw... a little depressing dont you think?
well I LOVE it!