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Carmel March 2008-02-04 . chapter 6
Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~
Fleeting Moment 2007-12-13 . chapter 6
Like it! UPDATE!!
I love the used 2007-09-24 . chapter 1
are you going to add a new chapter to this story or not cause its annoying to have to keep checking and seeing there isnt one p.s. soz if i sounded bitchy
Carmel March 2007-08-14 . chapter 5
Wonderful, wonderful story. I love this! You've got interesting, likable characters, a clever storyline, and a great style of writing.

I can't wait for more :)

~Carm~
tanya2byour21 2007-05-14 . chapter 5
Oh this waas so worth the wait. I can't wait to see if they ended up with any special powers from him claiming her. Great chapter and I love this story. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.
Tanya
Pandora Delarosa 2007-04-26 . chapter 4
Good chapter!! I'm gonna make a wild prediction here. Tell me if I'm right, wrong, close to right, or far from close. I think that Keiran is Regan in disguise trying to get close to Abby, and is mind controlling her. Am I on the right track or what?
Anyway, Ryder and Abby are a cute couple. I hope Ryder's okay!
Liquid-Sorrow 2007-04-23 . chapter 4
Yea, they're so adorable together. =)

But that was totally and completely freaky. I mean, the hell? Who the eff is this Keiran weirdo? Bastard. He's trying to kill Ryder!!

Update soon?

-Lqd
virgo-valentina 2007-04-20 . chapter 4
pls add!!
Sexy Vampire Princess 2007-04-18 . chapter 4
its ok. Thanks for updating. lol looking forward to the next one.
tanya2byour21 2007-04-18 . chapter 4
WOW that was so worth the wait and I really like this story and so can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work and please post more when you can.
Tanya
Liquid-Sorrow 2007-04-07 . chapter 3
Fantastic. =) I'm sorry I haven't been reading this. However, it's just lovely. Ryder-and-Abby is the way to go. x)

Update soon?

-Lqd
tanya2byour21 2007-03-14 . chapter 3
Hey if you want check then out when you can I know you will not be disappointed. I really like this story and so can't wait to read the next chatper to find out what is going to happen next. Please post more soon.
Tanya
Sexy Vampire Princess 2007-03-13 . chapter 3
nice. I'll like a longer chapter though. Looking for the nexxt one
tanya2byour21 2007-02-17 . chapter 2
Hey what can I say I love stories about Vamiper and the supernaturel I have read ever Laurall K Hamltion book I can get my had on and I own a few if you have not read them you need to check them out. Agian I like this story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work and please post more soon.
Tanya
Sexy Vampire Princess 2007-02-17 . chapter 2
great. I didn't have to wait long. lol iT'S GREAT. I'll be waiting for the next one.
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