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| Catseye*Rose 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseAlso adorable XD |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusemy adoration for this story is immense, and my intense respect/ needtoreadeverythingyouwriteness just grew. and on brokeback mountain... i love it, but it still kind of makes me want to tear out my heart and eat it because it would be less painful. seriously. i love it, though. just painful... --a.k.a. |
| mia5081 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I loved it! ~Mia |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseCute. :) |
| i-see-faeries 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, now I've got to see Brokeback Mountain. x] Love this, btw. So cute ... Love the line 'He's legal now.' For some reason, that made me laugh like crazy. |
| Imagined Insanity 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseoh god, i ** LOVE YOU. but i should also smack you, becuase now im gonna go spend 20 dollars on my own copy of Brokeback so i can watch it all over again. |
| magalina 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusecute! ^_^ I loved Frank`s character. |
| lilylupin7 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseCute |
| Jowaco 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseMy OH my...can't wait to read more! |
| Esquirella 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was really, really cute! |
| Naked Penguin Fetus For Pop... 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This was great. The Brokeback Mountain part was great. Overall, it was just great. God, I need to stop saying great. |
| sporkess 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseFun, very fun. My one critique of the story is that in the first paragraph, you use the word 'sex' twice in quick succession, and word repetition is something which always looks awkward to me. Otherwise, 'twas great. My favourite line: "My mind immediately perks up and screams at me, 'This means he's legal!'" And I just hope that James' best friend doesn't beat him up for ravishing his younger brother. A happy (belated) Valentine's day to you, too. |
| Asher Rodriguez 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abusePWP |