 Guardian Midnight Raven 2009-03-09 . chapter 3where is the rest of it? ~Sniff~ and wheres f.e.a-nightmare academy?
i sad now, although this is funny as hell. |
 Lerene 2008-09-06 . chapter 3OMG I just love this story. The Prince are just to funny. |
 Lerene 2008-09-06 . chapter 1I love how they all act in the morning! Myself am not a morning person. |
 Epona's left-handed relative 2008-01-04 . chapter 3 I love this story. So randomish and odd. YAYS. |
 Heart of String 2007-08-21 . chapter 2Hm...Since I already reveiwed chappie 3, I shall put in thee ideas and such HERE!
-Me and Hi have a odd traveling combo.He runs like mad while I work a horse to death.Only one can keep up with me, and her name is Chease The Lightning.Chease for short
-I FORGOT TEH OUTFITS!(I belive.Anyway, if I DID splane outfits, IGNORE THAT AND USE THIS!)Hiate wears all black save for a reddish brown vest, with dark green leather dragon boots(No, he aint evil or a murderer.He just didnt like that dragon, dangit).I wear ALOT of clothing layers(but not most of the time.My country is cold and SNOWY!), with a skin tight suit, then capri style pants(brown) and a blue tunic(nuthin on it.And the undersuit?Black!).Then a vest made of deer hide(I made it myself I did!) and my uber boots of leather, which are a reddis color.
-There is a BIG reward for me to be returned to my kingdom.So you all do so("ILL KILL YOU ALL IF YOU LEAVE BEFORE THE CERIMONY.""Ek!(cower)").We shall discuss this.
-I stayed in a village when I was 12(ran away at 10, right after friend left for milit.I am now 19).The village is of healers, and I apprentice under a phisician(basically a doctor who dose surgury), and his real apprentice was named Finn, and was 13. We became friends, and we can return to the village at some point(more discussion on msn when you get back)
-Me and Hi will do various jobs for money, but we also do a dancing gig(he dances, I play guitar, flute, or piano if available, and we both sing)
WE SHALL DISCUSS MORE WHEN YOU COMES BACK!NIGHTY NIGHT!
-String |
 Heart of String 2007-08-03 . chapter 3Heh...Okay, here is my character submission.
Name: String(but my FORMAL name is Prince Tolea von Twine, Lord of Purple and Animals...And the prince is because their's a beauty requirment for being a prinsess)
Age: younger than dirt, old enough to drink(in other words, 16 here)
Personality:Somewhat hyper, bold, gulible, sarcastic, short-fused, and quiet around strangers
looks:I wear a loose purple vest over a tight black body suit, which is under a pair of brown capri poofy pants, and I also have a green storage belt with fun things to use on poeple(party poppers, salt((for demons!)), pepper, things to make peoples allergies react, and a manipulation flute)And, obviously, alot more like a GUY than a GIRL.Oh, and Dark mousy hair, gold animal eyes, very tall.
history:I come from the country of Norm, which is dull and boring and RIGGED with requierments...which is why Im a PRINCE over a PRINSESS.Anyway, I run away from home because I hate my parents and my country.I figure out my animal manipulating ability, and learn swordplay from guards who pity me...(YES, I can SO pull cute puppy eyes)
Tools:Old katana, magic, bag of tricks!(come up with more, please!), and my animal allies, but my dragon(french white icedragon!Her name is Palitrine), and my wolf(a pure white color, blue eyes, large, very fluffy coat, named Skye) are constant companions.Okay, enough for now!
-String |
 ARIEoftheFOREST 2007-05-29 . chapter 3okay that is freaking funny |
 icedragonxyx 2007-04-10 . chapter 3ohk ? Y DID U MAKE ME THE STUPIDIST PERSON IN THE STORY CHEEZE I SHALL BEAT UR HEAD IN... ok im done just had to get that out.
hey keep going and i can't wait for the next chappie!
toodles. |
 :) 2007-04-07 . chapter 3 :)
hey.
haha i love their quests.
"The next morning, Raven decided, would be very interesting indeed."
haha
"“You’ll find out.”"
:)
haha thats great
:)
passover sucks.
:(
kbye
ily
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 Dinuriel 2007-04-07 . chapter 3Hahahaha!! Loved it!!
But Matthew wasn't in it... :(
See you tomorrow at the game, GO FLAMES GO! |
 Zakk Mortified 2007-04-02 . chapter 2Aw I feel bad for Julian.
Update soon k? please > |
 Zakk Mortified 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Oh I love this story it was funny especially the letters and their ridiculously long titles. XD |
 Icedragonxyx 2007-04-01 . chapter 2 hahahahaha i love it it's funny i feel srry for u.lol i done ok thyat was great so far oh and U.BETTER.MAKE.THE.NEXT.CHAPTER FAST. |
 ello poppet 2007-03-29 . chapter 2 :)
"“About.”
“Freaking.”
“Time.”"
sorry i'm not feeling very comment-ious today. :) but i'm going to do that someday. i get to say about. :)
well.
i'm sorry for the lack of commentary.
i'm tired.
and really sad.
so yeah.
see ya.
i'll email you.
:) |
 beadlety 2007-03-22 . chapter 1Oh, that was so funny! I love Sir Squellys! His name is SOO cute! XD |
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