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| haruku 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseShe's wacked and she can't take it anymore...so she goes and burns her fiance...alive...? Nuts. Pure nuts. But it's likeable. |
| Dot Cubed 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm actually really confused by this ending. So who was Katharine, really? I definitely liked the story and the descent into madness your character took, and the whole scene with Zach was very very chilling and almost uncomfortable. I just don't understand the ending. |
| Angel of Ink 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHeh. I wondered if she was Katherine... but does she have multiple personalities, or is she just a nut? |
| ThePerfectImperfection 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like that! I adore the twist at the end. ;) |
| caughtidlehanded 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseyour story was inventive- i loved it- the writing was ah-mazing-yes it was good it had to spell amazing wrong. the ending was also misspell worthy. i think its a one-shot you could elaborate on but your probably made it a one-shot for a reason so--basically the point is: your writing rocks my socks. p.s. sorry my review was so long, hopefully you like reviewers who blab on and on... and on |
| theinvisibleone 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseaoiueproiaudkj Wow. Just wow. I am completely blown away by this story and it was just amazing. I was actually just skimming, but towards the ending I was reading it fully and was like whoa. Because it was so unexpected, you know? Well of course you know; you wrote the darn story. But just wanted to say how brilliant it was. Completely Brilliant. |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abusei don't get it. i really dont. the speaker is Katharine? does she have like mental problems or something, so bad that she wants to light her fiance on fire because she isn't as good as... herself? by the way, the reason i read this story is my name is Katharine, spelled that way, the right way, not with a c or an e or even a y. just Katharine. i like it that way. |
| barkadaaa 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusewow...i really like this story it was really well written the ending was very...unexpecting...but nonetheless interesting although im not even sure if what i thought of the ending was what you intended for the readers to think i can actually relate to kate... not to the point of killing somebody... but definitely to the point of wanting to change myself to be another person... my point of view is that 'kate' and katharine are the same person ? katharine is the kate from years ago... and kate is the person she is now and the reason that katharine is 'kate' now is because she's sick of being the little-miss-perfect that katharine was that's my take on what your story means although you might have written it with a totally different meaning behind it... |
| ess3sandra 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abusei didnt get the end, did thqat mena that the sister was alvie and was her sister? huh |
| Wind's Whisper 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, that story just kinda came out of nowhere and brained me with a crowbar. Right now, I'm thinking that's a good thing. Amazing. You are such a great writer! Loved every word. |
| SimplySweetnSour 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abusewhoa. so was the narrator Katherine? |
| Cianna Greenwood 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI actually rather like it. ^_^ |
| the shakedown 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abusecompletely amazing, and astounding. i did not see that coming at all. it hit me like a sledgehammer. excellent, excellent work. its absolutely undescribable. |
| luv me like no other 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story is way wacked up, but I like it. It's awesome! However, I'm a bit confused at the end, so she's katherine? lost... |