Oh so cute. Ayers really didn't want to go home. I can understand the girl not wanting to share. Ayers sees no one but Nalin.

That was a great story. You can write a prequel about them hooking up. this is ideal for light hearted reading and I enjoyed it very much. Nalin & Ayers are the cutest.

Omg that was so cute! As usual. xD I always did want to know more about them. -nodnod-

I do wish it was longer, but I guess it can't be... It's a drabble after all. ^_^;; Now I'm off to read more of whatever other stories from you I missed while I was gone. xD

ah. really cute story! nalin and ayers are adorable. this is a story that i really feel you could expand upon- nalin's arrival in the north, their first meeting, how ayers and nalin got together, how they started this 'mercenary' lifestyle, etc. anyhow, i really enjoyed it! :)

I love this fic. So much.

*reads your bio page*
*starts to hold breath*
*patiently waits for another stroke of genius, otherwise known as a story by Qui*
>.>
*on a sidenote, has also looked at your favorites and now lubs you even more*

Creatively imaginative. It was a pleasure to read. Please keep up the hard work. Now you can up your total to $13.50:-)

I gotta be honest. I didn't expect the story to be over so soon!! And so anti-climactic too...

Oh well. It's still pretty cool and I enjoyed it.

Hey, I luved this story, awesome job! ^^ Shme!

I really liked this story^_^ I hope you write more about Ayers and Nalin soon, I'm looking forward to it!

I want more! Please continue the story of Ayers and Nalin! I don't have a great judge of their characters from just this one short story. More description of the two would be nice! All you know is that Ayers has dark hair and Nalin has blond hair. I can understand (but I'm not happy about it :P) if this is just a one-shot story, but I would love some more detail.

This seems like part two, and I want part one and part three!

My final thought: Greatly entertaining.

Love it! But where is the end? Much fluff!