i like it very much! it all goes so well together. i love it heehee you rock... ya C.T.

Sad and true. The last phrase didn't really rhyme. It was good though. Good job.

Amen to that, sister. Amen to that.

Cheers,

Maverick

I had a hard time finding out how Fake Love fit into this whole theme of truth and lies-I could see sincerity somehow fitting in there somewhere, but this seemed more like a lyrical, stream of consciousness jot to me. I'm not quite sure about this one. I see in this poem, more resentment for love than I do any kind of struggle for Truth or Life. It sounds like a revenge rant, in a way.

Wow, I love this! Great job!