Reviews for That Feeling Inside

Nemonus 2007-03-03 ch 1,	abuseReassuring and personal. Pretty good rhythm. The moral, that restlessness comes from faults...this comes with good timing for me. Thanks. I would, though, like to see that moral more explained and expanded. ~"Nemonus"
sin olvido 2007-02-15 ch 1,	abuseIt's a nice poem with a good message (although I don't agree with it at all, it's an inspiring sentiment to want to "get rid of greed"). The last line is a bit shaky: "He hears our pleads, He hears our cries." Shouldn't "pleads" be "pleas"? All in all, good job!