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| TheAngelofhope 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseGood job on this. Keep it up. |
| Asher Rodriguez 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseYou might want to use spell check, I saw a couple spelling errors as well as grammatical ones. Also I would like to see more detail added to this as well. It's got potential though so, nice work. -Asher |