Wow, this is amazing! I love this! Unfortunately, a can relate very, very well. I often wonder how an idea can seem original one day, one moment, and then when I go back and look at it, it's just boring, trite, unoriginal, and so forth. I often wish my writing was more prophetic, instead of lousy and amateurish... But now I'm just whining, so I'll shut up.

Anyway, really great poem, 100% from me.

Keep writing (no matter how discouraging it may seem at times).

:Isabella May:

yeah. this pretty much sucks when your a writer. Sometimes, I feel like I'm just re-using the same idea, and dressing it up in different moods and words and structures.

gah.

I like how you formatted this.