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Sworn Destiny
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI greatly sympathize. My pet mouse died not too long ago and I was really shaken up. Hopefully, while you have a poem mourning your pet, you can one day have a poem reflecting upon the joy you shared. :]

The poem itself is very well put together. There is great emotion and the word choice strengthens it, allowing the reader to feel for it.
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