Cute cat; reminds me of my cat (I miss him). Anyway, Dianne is a very intriguing character and I feel sorry for her because she goes to so many different schools.

Not crying...but crying is good for everyone.

I loved these lines : "Too weird. I'm seeing things that can't be good. Maybe chocolate cake would help." Sounds like any typical female...chocolate solves everything.

Calling the cat a little ball of fluff and shrapnel...now that is funny and cute. You have a way with words.

Reading in the dark...that sounds like something I would do...or something that I do do.

I also like how Dianne refers to her mom as Mom but her dad as Father...it shows that they may not be the closest...then again he may not like to be referred to as Dad; there are many possibilities. Then there's the description of Dianne's eyes...freaky but rather cool.

Boarding school in OHIO? There is absolutely nothing wrong with Ohio.

Hmm...a suitcase full of armor. This could be entertaining.

AVALON! I love Avalon. Okay enough of my geek moments.

Warlocks?! This story just keeps getting more and more fun twists. It is immensly interesting and keeps me on my toes wondering what will happen next.

"I was killed over this crisis. Make sure that you are not.”
Wow...no pressure there whatsoever.

Amazing start to this story. I am very intruiged and can't wait to read more.

Danielle Thamasa

This was good reading. Keep it up.